Thi$ $tory wa$ very detailed. I think there wa$ 2 much detail. My favorite pa$$age wa$ when he $aid, "I $aid I quit." I like it becuz he wa$ $tanding up for what he believed in. That$ what made that pa$$age meaningful. Overall thi$ $tory was O.K but needed more $k8boarding and more murder$.
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